Re(En)Vision Day 24: Paula Schulz

 The Praise of Birds 
(Original Version)
 
Can’t get enough of it ever--the flight
of birds. I love their navigation:  precise
 
as mathematics, their gyroscope-intricate
lift-and-return.  They’re wild to bet
 
it all in this older than thee-and-thou ballet.  
Again and again: the of joy of assay.
 
As though one mind had many hands,
they sculpt the air, slice away with abandon
 
leaving what can only be a rubble
of light and air in their wake. I’d double 
 
down too, if I could play this subtraction
game: quick wit, quicker reaction, piston- 
 
push, hairpin-turn, crossing vectors.  Blur.
For a moment it all seems to blend, whirl.
 
What is air?  What bird?   Oh this rais-
ing of body, loosing of spirit is praise,
 
soaring praise.



The Praise of Birds
(Re(En)Visioned)
 
Can’t get enough of      
(ever).
It’s their flight I love.
 
Their navigation         
as mathematics,
their gyroscope intricate --
 
They’re wild to bet all           
in this older                
thee-and-thou
 
ballet.  Again and again:      
joy of assay                
as though one mind     
 
had hands, they sculpt
they slice.           Away! 
With abandon!
 
What can only be      
rubble of light,
air in their wake:  double. 
 
Down too!      
If I could play this game:       
quick wit, quicker
 
piston-push,   
hairpin-turn,
vectors,           
 
blur . . .     
 
For a
  
It all seems 
 
 
to  whirl, what is
air?       bird?      Oh
this raising body, 
 
loosing spirit:     
praise!             
Soaring praise!

desolated harbors, amputated silence.

© 2020 Paula Schulz

Paula Schulz loves a prompt and the challenge of working on ekphrastic projects.  She lives and writes in Slinger, Wisconsin with her husband, Greg.

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